The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts demonstrate the advantages and disadvantages experienced by tourists visiting
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Bowmen Island. The Survey consists of eight categories in the
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percentages
.
Overall
, most
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agreed that the locals were friendly and the island has scenic views,
while
the majority of the visitors were not happy with the expensive housing arrangement. The tourists were satisfied with the four categories, out of which over three-quarters(77%) of the visitors found that the greatest advantages
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the island were the friendly
people
and the appealing scenery.Cultural sites were
also
given preference, listed by 12% of the
people
as an advantage. A small group of
people
(11%), found the accommodation to be adequate as well.
In contrast
, 50% of the survey responders were unsatisfied with the high living cost.
Moreover
, bad Weather
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and the lack of entertainment were the
second
major disadvantages,15% and 25% respectively.
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small percentage(11%) of the
people
complained about the food quality.
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