Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Pollution
has increased day by day and it is one of the paramount issue. It is irrefutable that all the countries faced
this
problem.In
this
modern era, some people articulate that, by increasing the price of petrol we can tackle
traffic
and
pollution
problem, ergo, as per my opinion
this
is not the best way to handle these issues.There are manifold ways,
suchsuch
to so extreme a degree
such
such such
as, promoting the public
transportation
and give education to laymen regarding the consequence of
pollution
.
Firstly
, authority should promote public
transportation
, so that more people use public
transportation
over the personal cars and vehicles.For
this
ministry should improve public
transportation
facilities, so that more and more laymen attract to the public
transportation
.Recent research concludes that due to lack of facilities and punctuation, people choose personal vehicle among the public
transportation
.So, to tackle
this
issue government can invest on the improvisation of public transport facilities and provide awareness on
this
.By
this
we can handle
traffic
consumption problem as well as petrol consumption. Another way to handle
this
situation is government should add
this
in education programmes of schools and colleges.
hence
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
, student have knowledge about issues and they can try to avoid being part of
this
.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, by running a campaign or using media, we can provide awareness to the laymen.
For instance
, currently in India one campaign has been running by government to tackle
this
situation, and it gives a huge public response,
thus
by doing
this
we can
also
control
pollution
and
traffic
issue. In a
nut shell
the shell around the kernel of a nut
nutshell
,
pollution
and
traffic
consumption
are
Suggestion
is
menaces
Suggestion
menaced
issues and there are may detrimental effect of these issues we faced.But, there are many ways to handle
this
situation
such
as, enhance the public transport facilities and run public awareness campaigns.I personally believe that the increasing price of petrol is not the effective way for these issues.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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