You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Mr. or Mrs, I hope you are doing well when my letter
reach
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reaches

The plural verb reach does not appear to agree with the singular subject my letter. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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you. I am writing to inform you that I can not join the company at the
previous
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previously

The word previous doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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determined date ,
next
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

week due to the changing in the booked air plan trip date out of my hand, which I have been informed yesterday by the
air plane
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aeroplane

The word air plane seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.

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company. I am really sorry for
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

delay, hoping I can join at the end of
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

month yours sincerely
suzan
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Suzan

It appears that the word suzan may be a proper noun in this context. Consider capitalizing the word.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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