Task 1: The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
The chart compares the proportion of
women
that gave birth to their first
child of different ages in Australia in three years 1966,1986 and 2006. Overall
, while
the percentage of women
who had the
Change the word
their
first
baby aged 30 or under followed an upward trend, the proportion of first
-time mothers
who fall into 30
to above 40 age group experienced an adverse pattern.
In 1966, the rate of 20 to 24-year-old Correct article usage
the 30
first
-time mothers
ranked first
, at more than 60%, followed by the ratio of 25-to-30-year-old first
-time mothers
and the proportion of women
who had their first
baby when they are 19 or under, at nearly 40% and 35%, respectively. About 13% of 30-to-34-year-old women
gave birth to their first
child, being nearly double for 34-to-39-year-old first
-time mothers
, at 7%. In addition
, the data of first
-time mothers
who fall into 30
to above 40 age group witnessed Correct article usage
the 30
gradually
increased throughout the period, from 13% to 50%, from 7% to 30% and from 2% to 5%.
Correct article usage
a gradually
By contrast
, the percentage of first
-time mothers
aged 19 and under and 20-to-24-year-old first
-time mothers
dropped significantly in 2006, to 15% and 35%, respectively. Furthermore
, the figure for first
-time mothers
who fall into the 25 to 30 age group decreased to 45% in 2006 after climbing to 55% in 1986Submitted by stephanieyoung0508 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, first, mothers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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