Task 1: The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.

Task 1: The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
The chart compares the proportion of
women
that gave birth to their
first
child of different ages in Australia in three years 1966,1986 and 2006.
Overall
,
while
the percentage of
women
who had
the
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first
baby aged 30 or under followed an upward trend, the proportion of
first
-time
mothers
who fall into
30
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the 30
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to above 40 age group experienced an adverse pattern. In 1966, the rate of 20 to 24-year-old
first
-time
mothers
ranked
first
, at more than 60%, followed by the ratio of 25-to-30-year-old
first
-time
mothers
and the proportion of
women
who had their
first
baby when they are 19 or under, at nearly 40% and 35%, respectively. About 13% of 30-to-34-year-old
women
gave birth to their
first
child, being nearly double for 34-to-39-year-old
first
-time
mothers
, at 7%.
In addition
, the data of
first
-time
mothers
who fall into
30
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to above 40 age group witnessed
gradually
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increased throughout the period, from 13% to 50%, from 7% to 30% and from 2% to 5%.
By contrast
, the percentage of
first
-time
mothers
aged 19 and under and 20-to-24-year-old
first
-time
mothers
dropped significantly in 2006, to 15% and 35%, respectively.
Furthermore
, the figure for
first
-time
mothers
who fall into the 25 to 30 age group decreased to 45% in 2006 after climbing to 55% in 1986
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, first, mothers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic changes
  • first-time mothers
  • age bracket
  • fertility rate
  • childbearing age
  • socioeconomic factors
  • educational attainment
  • healthcare advancements
  • family planning
  • societal norms
  • trend analysis
  • delaying motherhood
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