You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Say why he/she would not enjoy going college • Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • Suggest the types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Charlie,
How are you doing?
I’m writing in response to your
last
letter requesting my guidance on if you should search for employment opportunities or attend university. Thank you for writing to me last
week concerning my guidance on if you should search for employment opportunities or attend a university
I’m glad and honoured that you asked for my counsel on this
matter. I’d advice
you to secure a job rather than Replace the word
advise
further
your education because you’ll not appreciate college life. In university, you’ll have to attend numerous lectures with each lecturer giving the class homework after each tutorial. This
means that at the end of each day, you could be going home with four assignments at the very least, in
which would require you to spend ample Change preposition
apply
time
in the library researching for articles to be able to carry out these take home
assignments which in my opinion, is rather too stressful and energy draining.
You’re better off gaining employment because it would give you more Add a hyphen
take-home
time
to enjoy your social life in which, if you had taken up schooling, you would rarely have the time
to go out with friends and meet people. In addition
, working requires less reading thus
, you’ll spend limited Correct your spelling
this
time
studying documents, for example
, correspondences and reports. Also
, most importantly, you’d be earning some money for your upkeep and for solving other monetary requirements.
There’s a wide range of occupations that are appropriate for you given that you have some secretarial and administrative experiences and trainings
. So, I’d suggest you look out for job vacancies in those fields, Change the wording
training
pieces of training
for instance
, executive assistant, administrative officer, secretary and customer service representative, would
suit you perfectly. You’d have no issues adapting and working in these roles because Correct pronoun usage
which would
you’ve
the basic knowledge and background that will help you succeed in these areas of work.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Warm regards,
SamChange the wording
you have
you have got
you’ve got
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
