Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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At present there are a lot of opinions toward the ways of living. One proportion of people lean to a stability and change nothing, while the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
one believes that changes have only positive sides. I believe that both philosophies are worth considering in terms of types of changes.
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, individuals living stable and avoiding new things likely strongly believe that they need nothing, and all goals were already achieved. I suppose that
such
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personalities do not see the ways for a progress and try not to break the way of living they built. On the one hand it is far convenient to predict the future in terms of loans, taxes and holidays, but it is believed that
such
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life can gradually transform into a routine and become annoying.
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, people who are
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opting
to changes believe in beneficial progress, that means opportunity to improve skills or gaining new meetings. Some people behave in a slightly risky style becoming
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too, preferring
to unknown deals.
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, there
are
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is
a lot of money lost by people who try to earn easily via trading on the online platforms. On
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occasion, trading is obviously new for a prevalent number of people and lack of competences may take a negative side.
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Nevertheless it
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Nevertheless, it
is a fact that most well-being people gained their prosperity by assessment of early untouched businesses. Well-known businessman Richard Branson
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never holds
has never held
a technical position but successful in
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and railway business. In conclusion, both types of personalities have advantages and shortcomings as well. I
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appropriate to; intended for
for
far
more
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(usually followed by 'to') naturally disposed toward
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to change lovers because there are a great many opportunities appears and it is necessary to change the ambience as well as gain new skills in order to catch up with a modern pace of life.
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  • predictability
  • mastery
  • innovation
  • adaptability
  • personal growth
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  • enrichment
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