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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These
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 provide
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 about the
sales
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 made in a fair trade-tagged tea and
pineapple
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, between 2010 and 2015. As additional
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; when we look at the
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 for analysis, we can see that
,
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 both these two
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 include 6 rows and 3 columns. The columns show the countries, France,Austria, Germany,
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 and Norway,
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 rows show the
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of
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 years.
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these
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;
First
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the First
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 table gives
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 about the tea,
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 one shows
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 about the
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.
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 are measured in million euros.
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; it can clearly be seen that there was an
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, crease in
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almost
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in
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every nation for these products.The sale of
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tea
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sharply increased from 2,5 mıllıon of euros to 21 mıllıon in France. İt is
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 can be seen that, Surprisingly, the highest
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 of these fair trades were during
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 of
pineapple
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 in Austria, in 2015, around 48 mıllıon.We can infer that
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 about 3 fold increase. İn sharp contrast to
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, the lowest
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 were during
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 of
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 in the Netherlands in 2010 was about 1,6 million
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euros.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tables, information, sales, pineapple with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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