Some people believe unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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community
without pay should be a mandatory Use synonyms
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of the high Use synonyms
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curriculum (Use synonyms
for example
, carrying out Linking Words
charity
works, taking Use synonyms
part
in enhancing the Use synonyms
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where they reside or teaching fitness studies to younger children). In my opinion, I agree the environmental condition
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with
this
opinion because it boosts their career profile/opportunity in Linking Words
future
and helps to develop their moral background.
Including unpaid Suggestion
the future
community
work in high Use synonyms
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programmes will increase the career opportunities for the students when they grow up. Use synonyms
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heightens
their chances of gaining employment later in life. A resume that Suggestion
heighten
shows
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shows, charity
charity
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community
without pay stands out among other resumes with no Use synonyms
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service. Use synonyms
For example
, a documentary carried out by BBC news suggests that in recent times, employers prefer to employ an applicant who has done one form of Linking Words
community
service and Use synonyms
also
has experience in the field in which the vacancy is based on. Linking Words
Thus
, engaging in charitable services is an advantage for job seekers.
Another reason is that taking Linking Words
part
in Use synonyms
charity
and helping the Use synonyms
community
without pay assists in developing students morally. Engaging in Use synonyms
such
activities at that young age, allows them to understand that they are less privileged people in the society who needs their assistance and offering to support them is a commendable behaviour. Linking Words
Furthermore
, it is essential for them to understand that they can render some services without being paid. Linking Words
This
will make them understand that not all services are rewarded with financial benefits. To illustrate, a survey conducted in Bambi Secondary Linking Words
School
Lagos, concluded that students who engaged in Use synonyms
community
work as Use synonyms
part
of their curriculum in Use synonyms
school
appreciates the wealth their parents have because they are aware that some children are out of Use synonyms
school
because their parents cannot afford to pay their Use synonyms
school
fees. Overall, Use synonyms
community
service develops high Use synonyms
school
students morally.
In conclusion, some people are of the opinion that engaging in various forms of Use synonyms
charity
should be a compulsory aspect Use synonyms
in
the curriculum of high schools which I Suggestion
of
strongly agree to
. Suggestion
strongly agree
This
is because it increases their employability in the employment market and assists in increasing their moral upbringing.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite