Some people believe unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a belief by some individuals that serving the
community
without pay should be a mandatory part
of the high school
curriculum (for example
, carrying out charity
works, taking part
in enhancing the surrounding
where they reside or teaching fitness studies to younger children). In my opinion, I agree the environmental condition
surroundings
to
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with
this
opinion because it boosts their career profile/opportunity in future
and helps to develop their moral background.
Including unpaid Suggestion
the future
community
work in high school
programmes will increase the career opportunities for the students when they grow up. Charity
works and voluntary activities heightens
their chances of gaining employment later in life. A resume that Suggestion
heighten
shows
Accept comma addition
shows, charity
charity
work, or activity done to help the community
without pay stands out among other resumes with no community
service. For example
, a documentary carried out by BBC news suggests that in recent times, employers prefer to employ an applicant who has done one form of community
service and also
has experience in the field in which the vacancy is based on. Thus
, engaging in charitable services is an advantage for job seekers.
Another reason is that taking part
in charity
and helping the community
without pay assists in developing students morally. Engaging in such
activities at that young age, allows them to understand that they are less privileged people in the society who needs their assistance and offering to support them is a commendable behaviour. Furthermore
, it is essential for them to understand that they can render some services without being paid. This
will make them understand that not all services are rewarded with financial benefits. To illustrate, a survey conducted in Bambi Secondary School
Lagos, concluded that students who engaged in community
work as part
of their curriculum in school
appreciates the wealth their parents have because they are aware that some children are out of school
because their parents cannot afford to pay their school
fees. Overall, community
service develops high school
students morally.
In conclusion, some people are of the opinion that engaging in various forms of charity
should be a compulsory aspect in
the curriculum of high schools which I Suggestion
of
strongly agree to
. Suggestion
strongly agree
This
is because it increases their employability in the employment market and assists in increasing their moral upbringing.Submitted by amala.kambili on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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- however
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