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do you agree or disagree that children should be banned from playing computer games?

#children #computer #games
It is certainly true that
computer
 games have become the focus of everyone's concern.
some
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Some
 people believe that restriction should be there on playing games for children.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
disgree
be of different opinions
disagree
 with the given statement because it is beneficial for children if plays under parent's supervision. To commence with, the main reason to go against banning of
computrer
a machine for performing calculations automatically
computer
 games bring many benefits for children.
First
, these games introduce the basic
computer
 skills to the children in
playful manner
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a playful manner
.
they
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They
 get familiar with
basics
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the basics
 of computers.
Secondly
, playing on
computer
 enhances their
confidencea
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confidence a
.
For instance
, any game consists of different kinds of challenge and by facing these challenges
,
Accept space
,
they get confident to encounter
hurdels
a footrace in which contestants must negotiate a series of hurdles
hurdles
hordes
hides
 in their real life.
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
these games
helps
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help
 to
impriove
to make better
improve
 their logical and reasoning skills.Arms of empire
is
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are
 good example of
this
.There are many others games available online which can improve their mathematics skill.
Therefore
, participating in games on screen has many
advatnges
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
 for players.
on
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On
 the other hand, some people
thinks
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think
computer
 games are detrimental due its ill- health effects.
children
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Children
 spend most of the time in front of
computer
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a computer
the computer
.
too
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Too
 much playing games can impede the development of healthy habits
,
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,
such
 as reading books
,
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,
playing outdoor which in turns impact their health.
although
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Although
 it has some negative effects
,
Accept space
,
 can be minimized under parents control and supervision In conclusion, it is believed by some
,
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,
children should be prohibited
for
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from
 playing
computer
 games.I completely disagree with the given
opoint
a geometric element that has position but no extension
point
 of view because it's positive aspects are very useful and it's negative can be reduced to its minimum.
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