Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While many people are of the opinion that students who obtain outstanding academic results should be rewarded, another view shared by others is that those who

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a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

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and make great progress

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deserve a reward as a form of encouragement. From my own perspective, it is my opinion that they all deserve the incentives from their places of learning. There are certain reasons for me and other people to share the opinion that awards should be given to top students.

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reward system could create a highly competitive studying

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at school seeing that students often desire to win the prizes. The underlying explanation for

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is that in the view of the narrow gap between them and straight A ones, these potential school children would have strong grounds to put greater effort into their

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in the belief that they could be among the most excellent students in the foreseeable future, thereby receiving awards.

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, some universities usually publish their academic results in recognitions of top learners’ outstanding academic performance and offer them rewards, as well as the considerable effort put into studying

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would eventually spur some students who are close to the top tier to

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harder.

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believe that giving encouragement to those who make strides in their

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results in more

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encouraging or approving or pleasing

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outcomes. The reason is that

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could give them a sense of equality.

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stand a chance of getting a reward provided that they do make progress. By adopting

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approach, the pupils who make academic improvements would feel that they’re on attempts

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receiving recognition from their schools, thereby making more efforts to improve their studies. If school places sloe emphasis on academically excellent students and become oblivious to them, these learners would form the idea that rewards just find their own way to top students and that that fail to deserve any form of incentives

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their learning places.

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them and they,

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. In conclusion, in spite of various opinions about

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, I still take the view that A level students, as well as, those who achieve significant progress in their academic results, are all worthy of encouragement from their educational institutions.