The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
The diagram below shows the average
hours
of unpaid work
per week
done by people in different categories. In this
statement, the claimer said unpaid work
refers to activities such
as childcare at home, housework and gardening.
The graph bars show three classifications such
as, without children
, with one to two children
and people with more than three children
.
Married
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For married
Women
without children
unpaid work
per week
is 30 hours
and men
are about 20 hours
of unpaid work
per week
. Married women
with one to two children
are about 50 and the time spent in
Change preposition
by
men
is still 50 hours
per week
. More unpaid work
per week
when more than three women
have children
It is 60 hours
per week
. But married men
here are still less than 20 hours
per week
.
We can find the times change in married women
more than in married men
. Men
almost change with any amount of children
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