The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
The diagram below shows the average
hours
of unpaid Use synonyms
work
per Use synonyms
week
done by people in different categories. In Use synonyms
this
statement, the claimer said unpaid Linking Words
work
refers to activities Use synonyms
such
as childcare at home, housework and gardening.
The graph bars show three classifications Linking Words
such
as, without Linking Words
children
, with one to two Use synonyms
children
and people with more than three Use synonyms
children
.
Use synonyms
Married
Change preposition
For married
Women
without Use synonyms
children
unpaid Use synonyms
work
per Use synonyms
week
is 30 Use synonyms
hours
and Use synonyms
men
are about 20 Use synonyms
hours
of unpaid Use synonyms
work
per Use synonyms
week
. Married Use synonyms
women
with one to two Use synonyms
children
are about 50 and the time spent Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
by
men
is still 50 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
. More unpaid Use synonyms
work
per Use synonyms
week
when more than three Use synonyms
women
have Use synonyms
children
It is 60 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
. But married Use synonyms
men
here are still less than 20 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
.
We can find the times change in married Use synonyms
women
more than in married Use synonyms
men
. Use synonyms
Men
almost change with any amount of Use synonyms
children
.Use synonyms
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