The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
The given column graph elucidates the unpaid
work
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children
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work
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women
.
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hours
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work
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while
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male
from the same category do only 18 Fix the agreement mistake
males
hours
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. Whilst, Use synonyms
men
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children
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works
as do the males without Fix the agreement mistake
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children
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in contrast
nearly fifty Linking Words
hours
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women
. In the case of Use synonyms
women
, who nurture more than three offspring, spend the highest Use synonyms
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hours
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number of hours
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works
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work
hours
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