You rent an apartment and recently a new tenant moved in above you. This tenant’s behaviour is causing you a lot of problems. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Describe what the new tenant is doing, explain why it is disturbing you so much, tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about it

Dear Ms Kim, I am writing
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letter to express my concern about a tenant who recently moved into the apartment above mine on Sinclair Street. He is frequently smoking in the common area in the building where children play after
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school hours. Due to
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, the whole place has a nauseating smell and he is throwing cigarette chunks on the floor
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, he is playing loud music at midnight during the weekends when his friends come over. Because of the smoke odour, most of the other residents in the apartment are facing breathing problems.
Although
we requested him not to smoke inside the building, he is too adamant to listen.
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, my sleep cycle is being disturbed due to the loud noise, which is affecting my productivity throughout the day. I would like to request you to restrict smoking inside the building or at least in the common areas where children play.
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, it would be great if you suggest
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reduce the volume while playing his music and not
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use speakers during the sleeping hours. I hope you consider my complaint and take
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appropriate action. Yours Sincerely, Vijaya

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • noisy behaviour
  • disturbances
  • sleep deprivation
  • inconsiderate actions
  • frequent complaints
  • affecting my quality of life
  • seek a resolution
  • address the issue
  • mediate the situation
  • apartment regulations
  • peaceful coexistence
  • escalate the issue
  • tenant agreement
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