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In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reason? What can be done to solve this problem?

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 is a fact that people in various countries over the world waste a load of
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 they ate in shops and restaurants. I believe that there are several causes of
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 negative behaviour, and
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 some potential solutions could deal with
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 problem.
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 and foremost factor that causes waste of
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 is the dramatic rise in people's purchasing power. Due to
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, they tend to purchase unnecessary products, which leads to the wastage.
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. Intensive cultivation provides us with enormous amounts of eatables.
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, nowadays, a wide variety of products are available in the market.
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, the individuals usually buy
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food items more
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more food items
 than the requirement which leads to accumulation of extra
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 items that perish and ultimately are thrown away. For these two reasons huge amount of eatables are wasted. To curb
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 menace, there are two possible remedies.
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, the authorities should impose penalties on the people who throw away
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 more than a certain limit.
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, awareness campaigns can motivate the masses to reduce the wastage.
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, in the underdeveloped countries like South Africa, people are living in object poverty and they do not have access to sufficient
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. If people are shown their terrible conditions via pictures and video clips, probably, they will understand the prominence of
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 in their life. Their two measures will effectively work to central the negative trend. Having considered the topic carefully, it can be stated that the people will start to purchase the
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 items as per their requirement if they are about the poor plight of people living in abject poverty.
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, people should be made aware strictly punished
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 for negligence.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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