You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you that recently I lost my Apple iWatch while travelling to Kota on
train
no - 12345, Shatabdi Express on 20th March 2020. The
watch
is black in
color
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with a touchscreen and a silicone strap. 30 minutes before alighting at Kota Junction, I removed the
watch
from my wrist. My coach number was H2 and seat number 32. The
watch
was the table attached to
compartment
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the compartment
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wall below the window. The
train
arrived
Kota
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at Kota
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Junction at 2:30 pm on 20th March 2020. You can do the following things to expedite the search. 1. From the
train
manifest, contact the fellow passengers in the compartment
,
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if they saw the
watch
and can contact me if they have it. 2.
Also
, you can check with
station
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the station
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master, if anyone from the compartment did
handover
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the
watch
to him. 3.
Last
option is to contact the
train
ticket examiner, to whom the
watch
was given. I am
hopeful
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to get full cooperation from the railways and take necessary action to help recover my lost
watch
. Yours faithfully, Gaurav Madan

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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