Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.
Nowadays, travelling becomes a trending activity, since, visiting some rare places is the challenge for
traveller
. Suggestion
travellers
the traveller
However
, there could be some advantages ad drawbacks which will be discussed in this
essay before a rational conclusion.
There are several positive effects of travelling to the area
in which having a difficult condition such
as Sahara desert
and Antarctic. Suggestion
the Sahara desert
First
and foremost, the unique place causes a feeling of challenged that would create an incredible moment instead
of viewing a breathtaking view. By looking at the Sahara desert area
that needs a stable standing for keeping stability to walk on the soft sand, for example
, besides
, it also
has a stunning landscape. Furthermore
, some travellers would also
experience more valuable event which is scarce experienced by the other visitors. The Antarctic is an
beautiful Suggestion
a
area
that no many inhabitant living there, for instance
, this
automatically lead
the travellers to have Suggestion
automatically leads
unforgetable
time to see it.
impossible to forget
unforgettable
However
, the disadvantages are seemed dangerous for the comers in those places. Firstly
, the safety could not be guarantee
for facing unpredictable risk. It is highly likely that travelling to a Suggestion
guaranteed
such
nature place as desert
and Suggestion
the desert
continent
have to Suggestion
continents
wary
on the natural disaster, including be worried, concerned, anxious, troubled, or uneasy
worry
typoon
or tsunami. a tropical cyclone occurring in the western Pacific or Indian oceans
typhoon
typing
Moreover
, the level of security could not be predicted and less of safe guard
in those kind of areas. As for approaching the Suggestion
safeguarding
safeguard
area
, there must be some supported facilities, yet, in fact, it could be either provided or limited or perhaps unavailable. Thus
, the risk would be higher than the positive experience.
By way of conclusion, although
, the benefits are having an increadible
moment and more valuable event than others, but the negative effects are seriously taking some risks when arrive there especially in receiving safety and security. As I would restate that it better to plan a travelling to an obvious place with a right prediction, to avoid from any risk.beyond belief or understanding
incredible
incredibly
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...