Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Nowadays, travelling becomes a trending activity, since, visiting some rare places is the challenge for
traveller
Suggestion
travellers
the traveller
.
However
, there could be some advantages ad drawbacks which will be discussed in
this
essay before a rational conclusion. There are several positive effects of travelling to the
area
in which having a difficult condition
such
as
Sahara desert
Suggestion
the Sahara desert
and Antarctic.
First
and foremost, the unique place causes a feeling of challenged that would create an incredible moment
instead
of viewing a breathtaking view. By looking at the Sahara desert
area
that needs a stable standing for keeping stability to walk on the soft sand,
for example
,
besides
, it
also
has a stunning landscape.
Furthermore
, some travellers would
also
experience more valuable event which is scarce experienced by the other visitors. The Antarctic is
an
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a
beautiful
area
that no many inhabitant living there,
for instance
,
this
automatically lead
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automatically leads
the travellers to have
unforgetable
impossible to forget
unforgettable
time to see it.
However
, the disadvantages are seemed dangerous for the comers in those places.
Firstly
, the safety could not be
guarantee
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guaranteed
for facing unpredictable risk. It is highly likely that travelling to a
such
nature place as
desert
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the desert
and
continent
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continents
have to
wary
be worried, concerned, anxious, troubled, or uneasy
worry
on the natural disaster, including
typoon
a tropical cyclone occurring in the western Pacific or Indian oceans
typhoon
typing
or tsunami.
Moreover
, the level of security could not be predicted and less of
safe guard
Suggestion
safeguarding
safeguard
in those kind of areas. As for approaching the
area
, there must be some supported facilities, yet, in fact, it could be either provided or limited or perhaps unavailable.
Thus
, the risk would be higher than the positive experience. By way of conclusion,
although
, the benefits are having an
increadible
beyond belief or understanding
incredible
incredibly
moment and more valuable event than others, but the negative effects are seriously taking some risks when arrive there especially in receiving safety and security. As I would restate that it better to plan a travelling to an obvious place with a right prediction, to avoid from any risk.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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