The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
This
diagram allows us to take a glance into how
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geothermal
energy
is produced from cold
water
. Geothermal
energy
also
termed
as
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clean/green power has been generated and consumed
from
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ages, and as we all know, we are in a state of emergency when it comes to
environmental
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crisis.
this
diagram gives info about how geothermal
energy
is produced in the geothermal power plants from chilly
water
to
energy
which is circulated through the electric poles.
At
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the beginning, we can see that
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there is a container in which cold and fresh
water
is stored which is to be
further
processed into the plant. The liquid is run into the plant through a tunnel which is 4.5kms deep,
this
liquid is
then
injected into an injection well where there are ample
amount
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of hot and warm rocks which heats up the liquid to its boiling point. Moving on as the
water
gets heated up to its
limit's
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,
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that blazing hot
water
is pushed up through the production well to the ground level. Afterwards,
this
heated up
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water
is passed into a condenser where the steam is pressurised, these gases will eventually power the turbines to spin swiftly enough to energize the generator.
This
equipment will
finally
generate the charge and pass
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to the poles to light up the cities and provide current to all the surrounding civilizations.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • generate electricity
  • diagram
  • volcano
  • magma reservoirs
  • deep underground
  • heat
  • steam
  • geothermal plant
  • turbine
  • condensed
  • pumped back
  • underground reservoirs
  • transmitted
  • power grid
  • distribution
  • continuous
  • renewable
  • volcanic activity
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