The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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geothermal

energy

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is produced from cold

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. Geothermal

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termed

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clean/green power has been generated and consumed

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ages, and as we all know, we are in a state of emergency when it comes to

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crisis.

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diagram gives info about how geothermal

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is produced in the geothermal power plants from chilly

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to

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which is circulated through the electric poles.

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the beginning, we can see that

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there is a container in which cold and fresh

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is stored which is to be

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processed into the plant. The liquid is run into the plant through a tunnel which is 4.5kms deep,

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liquid is

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injected into an injection well where there are ample

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of hot and warm rocks which heats up the liquid to its boiling point. Moving on as the

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gets heated up to its

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,

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that blazing hot

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is pushed up through the production well to the ground level. Afterwards,

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heated up

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water

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is passed into a condenser where the steam is pressurised, these gases will eventually power the turbines to spin swiftly enough to energize the generator.

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equipment will

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generate the charge and pass

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to the poles to light up the cities and provide current to all the surrounding civilizations.