The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
This
diagram allows us to take a glance into how the
geothermal Correct article usage
apply
energy
is produced from cold water
.
Geothermal energy
also
termed as
clean/green power has been generated and consumed Correct word choice
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from
ages, and as we all know, we are in a state of emergency when it comes to Change preposition
for
environmental
crisis. Add an article
the environmental
this
diagram gives info about how geothermal energy
is produced in the geothermal power plants from chilly water
to energy
which is circulated through the electric poles.
At
the beginning, we can see thatChange the preposition
In
,
there is a container in which cold and fresh Remove the comma
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water
is stored which is to be further
processed into the plant. The liquid is run into the plant through a tunnel which is 4.5kms deep, this
liquid is then
injected into an injection well where there are ample amount
of hot and warm rocks which heats up the liquid to its boiling point. Moving on as the Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
water
gets heated up to its limit's
, Change noun form
limit
Than
that blazing hot Correct word choice
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water
is pushed up through the production well to the ground level.
Afterwards, this
heated up
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heated-up
water
is passed into a condenser where the steam is pressurised, these gases will eventually power the turbines to spin swiftly enough to energize the generator. This
equipment will finally
generate the charge and pass on
to the poles to light up the cities and provide current to all the surrounding civilizations.Correct pronoun usage
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