Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while other think that it is a waste of time.discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that
art
subject
is crucial for learnes
at school gain knowledge or skills
learns
learned
learners
subject
.Handfull
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assert
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art
is very usefull
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a very useful subject
very useful subject
subject
for children but
rest of folks claim that it is just Accept comma addition
children, but
waste
of time.Suggestion
a waste
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two things or people together
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and foremost, art
subject
has been become
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becoming
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in all regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
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across
Also
, art
subject
is very helpful for children to development of
their motor skillsSuggestion
children to develop
children to develop of
,
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,
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skill, social skill and so on.a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
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from Suggestion
Apart
this
, if toddlers opt art
subject
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subject, then
then
they can easly
get success in their with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
life
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life, for
for instance
, toddlers become good artits
as well as they a person whose creative work shows sensitivity and imagination
artists
artist
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subject boost
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this
learner can easly
become with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
succsessful person
in their life.
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a successful person
successful person
successful people
,
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subject, then
then
they cannot focusn
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focus
,
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result
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art
curricula then
they cannot become doctor
.
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art
subject
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the best way
art
subjects and related job so that many children will be choose
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chosen
choosing
art
subjects.Submitted by kaurkiranjeet628 on
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