Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. films stars, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Wich other types of job should be highly paid?

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populations

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think that famous entertainers are very well paid.

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better that other sorts of jobs ought have a high salary.

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agree with the stars can earn a great amount of money, because we live in a capitalistic world where the market is regulated by customers. I feel that many people disagree with the a singer or a sports of high p

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wins big incomes, due to they think that the job that a famous can do is simple and do not have a great contribution to society. For

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that other kinds of careers should receive a better salary which I think too.

For example

, teachers must have a better remuneration, since they are the base of the knowledge in a society.

On the other hand

, I consider that the famous stars do not have the blame of o

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enormous remunerations. In the case of Cristiano Ronaldo,

for instance

, he is paying for his job as a soccer player and for his work in publicity as well. So, his fans help that the Portuguese can be able to have that w

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the state of being rich and affluent; having a plentiful supply of material goods and money

wealth

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