The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the percentages of
boys
and girls
who were successful in their high school competency exams in the period from 2010 to 2011, by subject.
Overall
, students of both sexes performed best in Computer Science, Mathematics, and Foreign Languages, including French, German and Spanish. Results for boys
and girls
were roughly comparable the same in Computer Science and Mathematics. In other subjects, however
, there were some significant differences.
Girls
achieved by far their best results in Computer Science, with a pass rate of 56.3%, which was considerably higheraround
14% higher than the Correct your spelling
higher around
boys
. The difference was even greater / more marked in Chemistry, where over 16% / more than 16% more girls
passed. The only / The one / The
single subject where Correct article usage
apply
boys
’ results were better than girls
was Geography where they achieved a pass rate of 30.4%, which was 10% higher than that / the figure / the percentage / the pass rate / the result for girls
.
In general, we can say / we can see / the statistics show that during the period in question
Add a comma
,question
girls
performed better in most subjects in the competency exams than boys
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