A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Respect
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should be the most important thing in everyone's
life
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. Nowadays, person value be condemned by their social
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and property, even though old fashioned conscience is no longer in most people
life
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. In my perspective, I completely agree with
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happens due to the technology, especially social media, those thing developing
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concept in society. Social media play the main role in our
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. If we are watching films about envied, we are starting to follow that habit in our day to day
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. Following those bad habits in our
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we lost valuable habit
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others, loving our family members. There some film and drama that provides envied, enmity.
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film about anonymity that who is coming after 400 to avenge his friend.
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, everyone wants to be famous in society because of
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reason people find some bad way to be famous
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as doing some YouTube channels, blogs.
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most of teenagers doing some silly experiment in Facebook and YouTube. While they are doing
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things they are irreverent others.
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those people who doing a YouTube channel than people who doing good works to the society.
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Youtubers
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as ace family more than Doctors, Teachers. When we show Youtubers in public places we attempted to take some photos with them. In conclusion, people care more about what others think about their social status than what others think about their personality. I think we should
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all kinds of people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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