A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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Respect

should be the most important thing in everyone's

life

. Nowadays, person value be condemned by their social

life

and property, even though old fashioned conscience is no longer in most people

life

. In my perspective, I completely agree with

this

statement.

Firstly

this

happens due to the technology, especially social media, those thing developing

this

concept in society. Social media play the main role in our

life

Suggestion

lives

. If we are watching films about envied, we are starting to follow that habit in our day to day

life

. Following those bad habits in our

life

we lost valuable habit

such

respect

others, loving our family members. There some film and drama that provides envied, enmity.

For instance

, Iceman

this

film about anonymity that who is coming after 400 to avenge his friend.

Secondly

, everyone wants to be famous in society because of

this

reason people find some bad way to be famous

such

as doing some YouTube channels, blogs.

Although

most of teenagers doing some silly experiment in Facebook and YouTube. While they are doing

such

things they are irreverent others.

Moreover

, people like to watch

such

experiment. We

respect

those people who doing a YouTube channel than people who doing good works to the society.

For example

, People

respect

Youtubers

such

as ace family more than Doctors, Teachers. When we show Youtubers in public places we attempted to take some photos with them. In conclusion, people care more about what others think about their social status than what others think about their personality. I think we should

respect

all kinds of people.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Social status
Material possessions
Old-fashioned values
Honour
Kindness
Trust
Judged
Importance
Traditional
Reflection
Achievements
Hard work
Disregarded
Well-balanced
Meaningful
Cultural norms
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