You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say what the participant liked about the hotel. Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.

Dear Manager, I am writing
this
letter regarding the feedback about the food and the service in your hotel. The
first
point, I am a member of Eve's company and I organized an
all day
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meeting for 20 Participants in your hotel which was held on 25th March.
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all members are really appreciated
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the service because it feels us more comfortable and friendly. Unfortunately, our staff members are not happy about the foodstuff which was served on that day on account of the fact that
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they said that the food was overcooked and do not have more varieties.
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not many cuisine options for people who do not eat any meat.
Additionally
, I would like to give a suggestion to improve the meal quality by giving a proper train for your chef or hire another experienced chef and
also
I would like to recommend that if you can introduce more food items that would be
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great for people who have dietary problems.
Finally
, I hope our
next
visit will be a good experience rather than the
last
visit. Thank you,
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faithfully,

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