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Some people believe that you should practise. to what extent do you believe that?

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I prefer a group of
friend
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, because if you have one particular
friend
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, you may get bored of each other after a while. I like
having chitchat
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will chit chat
having chit chat
chatted chit
was chit chatting
have chit chatted
were chit chatting
 with them. I like watching tv series and films with them and talking
on
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about
to
 them together while watching them. I like spending time with them even when we do nothing specifically. It depends on what kind of childhood
friend
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 you had. If you have no longer any common point, it makes no sense to try to keep in contact with
this
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 person, but if it is the opposite, you should keep in contact with
this
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 person,
becausethis
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because this
 person is probably one of the oldest
friend
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 you made. If one has good character traits, it can be seen as a good candidate for a friendship, because you would want someone who you spend much time, open your private life has good traits. When I started to
study
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 in economics, I decided to take
university exam
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a university exam
 again, because I wanted to get
in
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into
 law
school
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 more than economics, but I was not
quitely
with low volume
quietly
 sure that I would get enough score to get
in
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into
 law
school
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 so I had to
study
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 both for courses in economics and university exam. It was
stressful year
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a stressful year
 for me. I was not able to have some spare time for myself. I had to
study
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 even on weekends, but at the
end I
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end, I
 took the exam, and was able to enter the
school
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 that I wanted. It gave me a pleasure, because I had wanted to achieve the goal and work hard to do so.
For example
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, when you are
senior year student
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a senior year student
 at high
school
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, you decide which course you will
study
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 in the university.
This
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 choice may
determine what
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determine, what
 business you will do, what people you will engage with and even with
who
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whom
 you will become
partner
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a partner
partners
. It depends on what stage you are at in your life. If you have not enough experience, if you don't feel
competence
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competent
 to decide on your own, it is better to take advice from your parents, but if it is the opposite, you should do whatever you want to do, even if your parents disapprove your decision. Some people are not quite sure with their decision, so they want to find some supporter, so they can feel more secure about their decision

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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