IN SOME COUNTRIES AN INCREASING NUMBER OF PEOPLE ARE SUFERING FROM HEALTH PROBLEMS AS A RESULT OF EATING TOO MUCH FAST FOOD. IT IS THEREFORE NECCESARY FOR GOVERNMENTS TO IMPOSE A HIGHER TAX ON THIS KIND OF FOOD

An increasing number of p

opulation

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the population

is facing

health

consequences due to overeating junk foods. I personally believe

this

matter of p

roblem

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the problem

could be tackled by a government’s adequate action, like imposing higher taxes on these harmful foods.

First

, age between 6-18,

this

period is very significant to a young individual’s body d

evelopment

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development, thus

develops thus

develops develops thus

thus

the parents’ responsibility to give a

dvice their children

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advice to their children

on h

ealthy diet.

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a healthy diet

By doing

this

high schoolers can integrate that knowledge into their daily lives to avoid fast-food r

estaurans

a building where people go to eat

restaurant

restaurants

chains owing to the fact that, adolescents often spend their quality time by hanging out with their classmates in those inexpensive places. Unless guardians do not provide any lesson for their children, it is the government’s who should take a

ctions

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action

by imposing higher taxes on fast foods to divert those from dining out. In developed countries the majority of n

ation

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nations

often develop

health

problems due to unhealthy foods.

For e

xample in

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example, in

the UK and the USA, there are more overweight people than healthy ones on the streets. Fast foods contain harmful chemicals which in later stages of the developments can lead to

health

problems

such

as diabetes, high pressure which can intertwine our daily lives of loved ones.

Moreover

, underlining

health

issues can put added strain on

health

services.

T

herefore it

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Therefore, it

is better to reduce taxes on healthy foods and levy taxes on junk food at the same time. To conclude with, education on living h

ealthy life

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a healthy life

is not only the parent’s responsibility, but

also

the g

overments’

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

government's

. By imposing higher taxes on high-calorie foods can prevent the nation become unhealthy due to the fact that more people would avoid those places to dine out.

C

onsequently there

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Consequently, there

would be less

health

impaired people on the streets.

M

oreover if

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Moreover, if

health

-related problems are prevented, the demand for use of medicines will decline which its production is highly costly to the governments. So that amount of money can be used for developing infrastructure.