New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

It is clear that modern technologies have influenced how children pass their leisure

time

. Despite some obvious drawbacks of

this

trend, I believe that these are overshadowed by the benefits. On the one hand, there are a number of

major merits

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the major merits

when young people take too much

time

to play with technological devices. The

first

downside is that it is difficult for parents to control what their youngsters see on high-tech gadgets

such

as computers or mobile phones.

Therefore

, they can imitate the negative

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

behaviours

such

as violence on a piece of technology. Another minus point

is the

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is, the

more

time

juveniles spend on cutting edge, the less

time

they do physical exercises and outdoor activities which might lead to health problems at a young age.

For example

, they may suffer from obesity due to staying glued to screens for a long

time

or their eyes can be weaker if they play computer games within

more

being nothing more than specified

mere

two hours.

On the other hand

, I believe that the demerits are more significant than

such

disadvantages.

Firstly

, up-to-date technologies can widen

children’s horizons

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the children’s horizons

by providing useful and educational information in different areas.

For example

, my young niece often watches English cartoons on a huge variety of entertainment channels.

Therefore

, he could not only improve his ability to listen and speaking

English but

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English, but

also

would relieve stress and anxiety after a hard day at school.

In addition

, parents would feel secure about their teenagers when they kill their spare

time

with enjoyable ones at home

instead

of spending with real-life friends outside. The reason makes them set their

mind

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minds

at rest is that they can control and manage their adolescents more effectively when they are in parents ‘sight. In conclusion, I would argue that filling youngsters’ playtime on using advanced technologies brings more positives than negatives owing to the aforementioned points.