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Having more international sports events may promote world peace. It`s agree or disagree question.

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Nowadays, society finds ways for friendly relationships between different nations and tries to achieve the peace on the Earth. One way is world
sport
 competitions. In my opinion is a powerful method because it is connecting people together, develop them and makes harmony. The main role of
sport
 in human`s life consists to develop the physical resources of the body and regulates psychological mood of the person. So, according to the Guardians, people, had athletics activities in their life, are more happy and stable for stress.
For example
, when I was a maternity leave and feel sad or depressed I can solve these problems with physical exercises.
Although
, it seems to me strange but when I only sat down 20 times, I felt myself better. I can see that it is truth. So, I have thought that world events present and make
sport
 style of life more popular and attractive.
Also
, international competitions of
sport
 connection a lot of people from many different countries. The sportsman on these events can change culture their nations. What follows to peace, because people became close to each other and start understanding someone is better. For an instant, my younger son was on international competitions of Capuero
last
 summer. He was there only ten days but he got a huge experience. He could speak to other children and practice
such
 way his English.
Also he
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Also, he
 learnt there new things about Brazil. After competitions he starts learning English effectively and interesting Spanish. In conclusion, I believe that international sports events can develop world peace. Because
sport
 helps society to become healthy and emotional stability.
Also these
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Also, these
 events connection people together a positive way and allow
to
being one more than one
two
 knew each other better.

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