Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There’s no doubt that in the modern World poorer countries dealing with a lot of

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problem

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problems

than rich nations. While some people

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believe

that, modern countries should prevent a lot of thinks

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only

financal

involving financial matters

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support will be not enough for them

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others

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argue

that, the

money

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can solve any

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and rich countries could focus their areas. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides of the

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and explain my support for the former view. Nowadays, countries who have not enough

money

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suffering more problems than others.

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, in these countries they

can not

can not

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access medical systems well and even when they are not suffering any bad disease, it can

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still be dangerous

for them,

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as flu because of their health systems. To solve

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problems richer countries can help them.

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, if rich nations prevent health than the countries who have not enough

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will not suffer

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problem

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anymore.

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, some people believe

money

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can solve any

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.

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, the experience of using

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is so important like

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situation

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, even if they reach the

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, when they do not have any profession for any

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they will only lose

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for nothing.

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, the

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does not provide experience,

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experience does. If modern countries prevent a pathway for poorer nations, these countries could use

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money

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effectively. In conclusion,

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money

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can solve some problems,

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, in my opinion,

money

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will not enough for poorer countries. The countries who have enough

money

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, should prevent to poor nations professionals and pathways with

money

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.