Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There’s no doubt that in the modern World poorer countries dealing with a lot of

problem

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problems

than rich nations. While some people

believes

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believe

that, modern countries should prevent a lot of thinks

also

only

financal

involving financial matters

financial

support will be not enough for them

,

Accept space

,

others

argues

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argue

that, the

money

can solve any

problem

and rich countries could focus their areas. In

this

essay, I will discuss both sides of the

arguements

a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

arguments

and explain my support for the former view. Nowadays, countries who have not enough

money

suffering more problems than others.

For example

, in these countries they

can not

can not

cannot

access medical systems well and even when they are not suffering any bad disease, it can

be still dangerous

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still be dangerous

for them,

such

as flu because of their health systems. To solve

this

problems richer countries can help them.

For instance

, if rich nations prevent health than the countries who have not enough

money

will not suffer

this

problem

anymore.

In other words

, some people believe

money

can solve any

problem

.

However

, the experience of using

money

is so important like

this

situations

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situation

.

For instance

, even if they reach the

money

, when they do not have any profession for any

problem

they will only lose

money

for nothing.

Furthermore

, the

money

does not provide experience,

however

experience does. If modern countries prevent a pathway for poorer nations, these countries could use

this

money

effectively. In conclusion,

although

money

can solve some problems,

however

, in my opinion,

money

will not enough for poorer countries. The countries who have enough

money

, should prevent to poor nations professionals and pathways with

money

.