• Some students found some subjects such as mathematics, philosophy are difficult, so these subjects should be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many leaner found that some subjects

example mathematics

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example, mathematics

philosophy

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is too hard, so there subjects should be an option better than compulsory. I agree that not every student is interested in mathematics,

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philosophy

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philosophy, however

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, those subjects are important in daily life.

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out the following paragraphs. Every student is not interested in the same subjects it would be good if leaner and choose subjects that

they

of them or themselves

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interest. It can effect in the long term people can not stay with the things that they

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like for a long time. A clear example of

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is when I was in secondary school, I

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have a change to take the subject so I have to study do mathematics while, I am not interested It was very hard for me to deal with it in that period of time I truly

don’t

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have any passion about mathematics.

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, It’s can lead to why student

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don’t want

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to go to school.

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, mathematics and

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those subjects are very important in our life, people still need to learn about it. Undeniable that it is the roots of many things.Sometimes we can’t choose what we want. In my point of view, university or school should have the individual time table of the study period. To make it clear think of drawing if you don't know about the measurement how can you make the line. In conclusion, not every person is good at the same things,

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sometime we need to learn thing that we not interested.

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or many more are the base of many things that can lead you or guide you to the success.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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281 words

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