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In some countries, it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes and effects of this problem?

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Over the
last
 few years, a multitude of people
aging
a contentious speech act; a dispute where there is strong disagreement
arguing
 over 50
have been facing
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has been facing
 plenty of difficulties in getting a better job in spite of their experience of years in several countries of the world.
This
 problem has become more complicated due to some reasons contributing to
this
 issue. In
this
 essay, I will look at the reasons and give more detailed information about the effects of
this
 trend. ​ ​ One of the main reasons of having problems in obtaining a beneficial job after aging 50 is
such
 people's inefficiency. These people are replaced with youngsters who are more energetic because the elderly are considered​ not only to perform the given tasks poorly, but
also
 to waste a great deal of time thought to be extremely significant. Another reason is technology. In spite of the fact that the elderly have much more experience on how to solve various issues, some advanced devices devised by experts are commonly utilized due to their speed of performing work.
Therefore
, employers prefer purchasing the latest devices
in stead
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
 of hiring old people. ​ ​
This
 trend has some detrimental effects on both society and science. If people over 50 are not permitted to work in better workplaces, it is more likely to affect the refinement of scientific techniques negatively. New methods for dealing with problems associated with science will not be generated which will
also
 have
extremely negative impact
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an extremely negative impact
 on the development of society. ​ ​ To sum up, there are both some
reasons including
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reasons, including
unproductivity
not producing or capable of producing
unproductive
 and technology, and effects,
such
 as affecting science and society negatively. Lots of
actions
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action
have
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has
 to be taken by governments in order to preclude
this
 issue.
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