The two pie charts illustrate why British do migration to and from during a question period.
The two pie charts illustrate some contributing factors which led to immigration and emigration of
people
in the year 2007 in the UK
.
Overall
, what can be observed from the charts is that a bulk of people
migrated in order to find a definite occupation.
Looking at the detail, the proportion of people
who immigrated and emigrated to accompany someone was 15% and 13% respectively. More than a quarter of immigrants (26%) stated educational purpose as a main reason whereas
a very small number of the British (4%) left the UK
to pursue formal study. About 30% of people
both immigrated to and emigrated from the UK
to have a definite job.
Furthermore
, percentage
of emigrants who went from the Correct article usage
the percentage
UK
seeking for
jobs was 10% higher than Change preposition
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proportion
of immigrants for the same factor. Add an article
the proportion
However
, more than one in twenty of
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people
didn’t mention any reason why they came to the UK
and the ratio for emigrants was 18%. Finally
, the percentage of people
who indicated other causes for immigration was 11% while
the proportion of emigration for that was 14%.Submitted by severceferli68 on
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