Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Despite the modernization of beliefs in gender equality some people may argue women should compromise their careers to raise a kid. I strongly disagree

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with

this

notion and believe in equal contribution from

both

the parents to raise their children and equal freedom of choice for

both

the genders when it comes to their careers.

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Further, in

this

essay we will discuss why is it wrong to only burden a

woman

with the responsibility of childcare. Modern women are having flourishing careers in all the sectors. Gender equality at work places is becoming a priority for employers. Because employers invest in female employees as much as in male employees and

hence

their expectations of returns are equal

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for

both

the genders. And most women have been giving results beyond expectations and

also

in some cases a

woman

's performance at work exceeds levels of a

man

's performance. Even though there is a change in mindset of people as some people are getting

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progressively

more progressive

, some people continue to have their regressive beliefs

such

as women should focus on raising children and should compromise their careers in order to support the family. Not only is it unfair to women, but its

also

a heavy loss to the society we live in, as it majorly affect the economies of the world. We may miss out on a lot of ground breaking work which may have come from the women who have the potential to bring those results. Earning bread by having a career and raising children

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is

both

full time jobs.

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Also, both

both

the jobs require a lot of effort. Rather than leaving either of the jobs for either of the genders.

Both

genders should come in and contribute equally in

both

the jobs by dividing the labour equally. Just the way a

woman

cannot miss out on the opportunity to have a successful career. A

man

shouldn't be kept from having a life changing experience of seeing his child grow, as a

man

may

also

have the desire to plant seeds of his own personality in his children. In conclusion, a

woman

needs to be given equal rights as a

man

, to

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choose

what she wants to do with her future. And on either of the decisions of her a

man

should support her. Because

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the women workforce

is as much a resource as workforce of men. For optimum utilisation of

both

the

resources equality

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resources, equality

shall be promoted. If men aren't great at childcare they need to improve that skill because a

children

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child

needs

both

their parents to have a happy childhood.