Improvements in health, education and trade essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is important to create an equal development across the globe. It is debatable whether developing poor countries

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their authority or others. To my perspective, opulent nations should partake to solve poorer nation problems’ because they have more resource to deal with the challenge.

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of all, Rich countries have more funds to assist poor nation programs' in building infrastructure, reducing poverty and improving the quality of human resources.

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, Australian Government gives scholarship to Indonesian Citizens. By studying abroad, people from developing countries will get more knowledge and build their networking. So that, after finishing their study, they go back to their country and apply what they have learnt.

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, building infrastructure is essential to open isolate areas so local inhabitants have a chance to go somewhere and do economic activities. Regarding with

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, poorer nations do not have enough budget.

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, money grant from

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developing

countries become a good way to deal with the problems.

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, because of the assistance,

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sometimes makes the poorer less independent. They do not think to manage their local resource properly and only consider about the grant. I

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,

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of managing their local tourism place, local people prefer to

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help from other stakeholder to manage it. To sum up, I believe that it would be great for developed countries to help poor countries in dealing with crucial problems

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as poverty and education.

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means the responsibility becomes both countries. Government,

private sector

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the private sector

and societies should be aware to solve the issue together.