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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. *Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is argued by some people that the preferred means to promote
road
 worthiness, is to minimise the extent at which commuters over speed on the highway. Others opined that, there are other ways it can be achieved. Even though I agree that reducing maximum speed limits is a way to ensure
road
safety
, sensitising the community about
safety
 precautions on the
road
 by conducting lectures monthly on the television will help to maintain orderliness on the
road
. It is of the view by
s
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of
ome people that, in other to ensure protection of lives on the
road
, maximum speed should be minimised.
This
 is because, some dr
ivers d
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driver
rives recklessly and it has led to lo
ss o
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the loss
f so many lives on the
road
.
For example
, an accident was averted by the monitoring team of the
road
 officials on Lagos- Ibadan ex
press-way w
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expressway
here a driver was caught on another person's lane.
This
 could have led to a serious accident. With the help of
road
 officials on the
road
, the rate of accident occurring ev
eryday w
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every day
ill reduce drastically.
On the other hand
, some people are of the opinion that, creating awareness through lectures on the television will ensure
road
safety
. The reason is because, some citizens ne
eds t
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need
o be well informed almost all the time about the rules and regulations that guides
road
 users.
For example
, a friend of mine that just came back from Canada is limited to some information's about
road
 signs after he left the country. Communication essential so that people won't be misinformed about la
test development i
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the latest development
n the country.
Therefore
 go
vernment s
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the government
hould empower the body in charge of
road
safety
. In conclusion, even the it is necessary to ensure
safety
 on the
road
 by reducing maximum speed limits, it is
also
 important to know that
road
 users need to know the rules and regulations that promote
road
 worthiness
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