Some people believe that modern inventions have more problems as compared to their benefits. Do you agree or disagree?

Thanks to some innovations
,
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,
today we can come across something novel, whereas the discoveries associated with technology has changed our lives in detrimental sense.I
also
agree with
this
concept and will support my standpoint.
Firstly
,
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,
the
internet
which is indeed considered
such
new essential technologies have impacted the people's lifestyles by making them more sedentary.So that the people because of frequent use of
internet
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the internet
can be isolated from their families or friends and they would rather spend their time in front of their phones or computer for a long time.It in turn can induce the people confront with some health hazards like eye strain
,
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,
neckstifness
, blood pressure and so on.
Moreover
the very young people
in particular
the little ones due to
internet
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the internet
can be distracted from their study by entertainment sites
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,
in
this
way
this
kind of activities which are given by
internet
hinder the
flourishment
of analytical and critical thinking. The other point about the negative effects of discoveries is that nowadays, the people can misuse the innovations to their malevolent intentions.
For instance
, we can say the nuclear fusion
,
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,
because it intuitively had been manufactured in order to make the standard of lives better.
However
,
as a result
, there is a conventional picture about
this
scientific innovation and it involves an awful event in history
, suchsuch as
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, such as
, such such as
a nuclear war which have certain impacts over the people on the surface.
Third fact
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The third fact
is that the ozone layer depletion and global warming, which exist as actual substantial issues of the world are
also
caused due some pollution which the new manufactures release of water or weather the most.Burning of fossil fuels given by the latest technology
instead
of utilizing of alternatives like wind and solar energy can establish hazard for worldly living-beings. The latest statement is overuse of technology for committing some crimes by operating some machines.
For instance
the people suffer from hacking
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,
viruses or credit card scams associated with someone's attack to personal data and it in turn probably bother the people because of disclosing their privacy to public.
As a result
, because we live in the cutting-edge era
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we can encounter some issues which arise due to the destructive power of science.
That is
why I see the innovations as main drivers of mishaps.
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