There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter • Describe the problems • Explain how these problems are affecting you and others • Suggest what could be done about it
Dear Manager of public transport
I am really sorry for writing the letter, but hereby I would like to inform you about the public transport of your company. Well, I have some problems with your transportation;
First
, the driver always comes to pick up
late. The Correct pronoun usage
you up
second
, the bench reservation is always wrong.
I would like to tell you about the reason why,
the driver always comes late. It was because Remove the comma
apply
the
flat tire, the engine broke, the break did not work properly. So mechanic takes tike to repair it, and that took a long term. In Change preposition
of the
this
case, for instance
, I need to go to my destination,
and should arrive in time. Because I must attend an opening of a conference in point.
The Remove the comma
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second
,
is about bench reservation. I few times booked for seat number 5, Remove the comma
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however
, on the departure day, I got seat number 8. That was very inconvenient. I use to get dizzy and make me
throw up. Correct pronoun usage
myself
Further
, it Influenced me more.Therefore
, when I arrived in the city, I almost could not attend the conference.
Therefore
, I would like to tell you some suggestions; Firstly
, as a manager, you should work with your mechanics, if it is needed, please make a list form to check whether the condition of the bus is healthy. The engineer should make sure about it at least a day before departure time. Secondly
, you need to control your reservation staff, to make sure that they work with a high concentration so that, they are right to book the passengere's
seat as required.
Thank you for your attention, I hope your company will serve better in the future.
Best regards
SantyCorrect your spelling
passenger's
passengers
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