It is said that we should live with climate change instead of fighting against it. Do you agree or not?

A number of other compelling reasons will be raised to support the human being fight climate change
instead
of living with it.
First
, Global warming
make
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makes
animals on the brink of extinction or endanger species.
For example
, in
term
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terms
of melting ice, many animals like the polar bear will manage to find shelter and food, which is a sign of the food chain being affected, and it will be direct threat people living in the same
ecology
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ecological
.
Second
, climate change will melt the ice, and
this
lead to land encroachment of
sea
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the sea
. In areas people live along the river, example Viet Nam or The Philiphine, sea encroachment will cause people to lose accommodation, land for living and economic development. In conclusion, the idea of tackling with climate change should be encouraged. By consuming less, recycle more and be highly conscious of environmental protection.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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