the graph below shows the percentages of people in different age groups to the gym at least once a month in Europe from 1998 to 2018 and the projection
The line graph compares the percentage of people in different age
groups
who went to the gym at least once a month in Europe from 1998 to 2018 and the projection.
The percentage of the group of 44 to 53 years
old is almost keep
stably which only rise about 3% in 20 Change the verb form
almost keeps
years
. The group of 34 to 43 years
also
increased gradually in 20 years
, but the number of
the proportion of 34 to 43 Correct quantifier usage
apply
years
is higher than the 44 to 53 one. What’s more, it is predicted that the trend of 34
to 43 group will grow faster than the other one.
The Correct article usage
the 34
groups
of 24 to 33 years
old and 18 to 23 years
old are
increased rapidly in total. Unnecessary verb
apply
In
1998 to 2010, Change preposition
From
this
two Correct determiner usage
these
groups
all keep the scale between 15 to 20 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
although
have a slight
Replace the word
slightly
increased
.
In summary, the trend of the percentage of gym goers in four age brackets is increasing. Replace the word
increase
According to
this
graph, it is easy to found
that the proportion of the age Wrong verb form
find
groups
which less
than 33 Add a missing verb
are less
years
old is higher than Correct pronoun usage
those which
which
Correct pronoun usage
those
more
than 33 Add a missing verb
are more
years
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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