The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are two charts about
land
Use synonyms
degradation
. The pie chart shows the primary causes of Use synonyms
land
Use synonyms
degradation
around the world, the other which is a table shows the effects these causes have Use synonyms
in
three continents during the 1990s.
There are three main reasons that make Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
land
used in agricultural activity become less arable between 1990-1999: over-grazing (raising too Add an article
the land
many
Correct quantifier usage
much
livestocks
), Correct your spelling
livestock
over-cultivation
(growing too many crops), and deforestation (destroying Use synonyms
forest
). If we look into the places or continents where Fix the agreement mistake
forests
is
most affected, it is Europe, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
following
are Oceania which placed Australia and North America.
Wrong verb form
followed
According to
the pie chart, the leading cause of Linking Words
land
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degradation
in the 1990s is raising too Use synonyms
many
Correct quantifier usage
much
livestocks
which accounts for 35 Correct your spelling
livestock
percent
. Deforestation is the Change the spelling
per cent
second
-most leading cause which accounts for about one-Linking Words
third
or 30 Linking Words
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Over-cultivation
followed up with 28 Use synonyms
percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
, Linking Words
according to
the table, we can see that Europe was the most affected continent Linking Words
in
both Change preposition
by
from
deforestation and Change preposition
apply
over-cultivation
, resulting in Use synonyms
highest
total Correct article usage
the highest
land
Use synonyms
degradation
. Oceania, Use synonyms
however
, despite no Linking Words
land
degraded from Use synonyms
over-cultivation
, Use synonyms
it
suffered the heaviest damage from over-grazing. North America took Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
smallest hit from each cause and total Change the article
the
land
Use synonyms
degradation
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, degradation, over-cultivation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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