The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph depicts the number of commuters whose
commuting
Wrong verb form
commute
metro
in London and Correct article usage
the metro
also
denote
the travelling time between 6 am to 10 pm.
Correct subject-verb agreement
denotes
Initially
, the consumers started using subway
from morning 6 am to till night at 10 pm. Early morning, the proportion of usage subway is very low. But later on, it started increasing before it reaches 8 am. Around morning seven-thirty to eight-thirty are considered to be a peak hour, Correct article usage
the subway
likewise
evening five-thirty to seven-thirty.
It showed a drastic fluctuation proportion of around 10 am to 8 pm. Around 4 o clock the usage of commuters become 100, it reminds the ratio of early morning traveller. End of the time, it shows the least number of travellers who takes the subway and it is considered to be minimum
Correct article usage
the minimum
users
.
Correct quantifier usage
number of users
Overall
, the maximum number of passengers who commuting
the transport is mainly in the morning and late afternoon, Wrong verb form
commute
whereas
there is some fluctuation in the remaining time.Submitted by jittusks96 on
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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