Some people think that all university students study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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subjects which they like.
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, those who disagree with the opinion that they should only be allowed to
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subjects that will be useful in the future. In
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following essay I will discuss these views according to personal perspectives. On the one hand, people have own interests and they can do things which are related to their abilities.
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, learning subjects is
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, studying all subjects perfectly is tough for students.
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the technology
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, technology classes are taught at universities. Deep learning these disciplines is beneficial for the future of students. It is never wrong to know and learn about everything in the world. To conclude, a person may have different situations in life, and in those situations, he or she will have to apply his knowledge
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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