Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. To what extent do you agree ?

The information about cultures and history can be found on the internet
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museums are not needed anymore.I do not agree with
above statement
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the above statement
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Firstly
, The culture of India refers collectively to the thousands of distinct and unique cultures of all religions and communities present in India. India's languages, religions, dance, music, architecture, food and customs differ from place to place within the country.Indian culture, often
labeled
bearing or marked with a label or tag
labelled
as an amalgamation of several cultures, spans across the Indian subcontinent and has been influenced by a history
that is
several millennia old. Many elements of India's diverse cultures,
such
as Indian religions, philosophy, cuisine, languages, dance, music and movies have a profound impact across the Indosphere, Greater India and the world.
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A museum is an institution that cares for (conserves) a collection of
artifacts
a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
and other objects of artistic, cultural, historical, or scientific importance. Many public museums make these items available for public viewing through exhibits that may be permanent or temporary.The largest museums are located in major cities throughout the world, while thousands of local museums exist in smaller cities, towns, and rural areas. Museums have varying aims, ranging from serving researchers and specialists to serving the general public. The goal of serving researchers is increasingly shifting to serving the general public.

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  • In general

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