Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

• Some people believe that some companies sponsoring sports as a way of advertising is advantageous whilst others argue that it has drawbacks. • The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument. • On one
hand it's
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hand, it's
is clear that nowadays many companies sponsor sports in order to advertise themselves. It has its advantages as well as its disadvantages.
First advantage
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The first advantage
of sponsoring sport is sportsmen are given best goods of the
company
free of charge and
by
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with
the help of these equipments sportsmen can achieve high prestige which affects positively for the
company
too.
For
instance in
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instance, in
such case
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a such case company
company
can link their names to successful players which in its turn can affect the sales of the
company
rise rapidly.
Furthermore as
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Furthermore, as
many people claim sports has plenty of followers throughout social
media which
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media, which
provides the
company
with social media support which that
also
can help the sales to rise. •
On the other hand
the other people argue about
harm
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the harm
of the sponsoring sports. The disadvantage of advertising through sport is that the
company
can be too closely linked with the team or the player which can cause bad effects on
company
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the company
. To put it
to
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in
another way, the sales of the
company
could be affected by performance or
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of the sportsmen so when sportsmen misbehave or face a fall in their careers
consequently
it can make the sales drop.²³³ • On the whole, I believe that the idea of advertising through sponsoring sports is beneficial whilst
on the other
hand it's
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hand, it's
undeniable that it has its drawbacks as well. 262words

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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