television and internet have brought revolution in the field of communication and entertainment, but their excessive use has negative impact too. discuss both the views.

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nternet
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The internet
is a tool which is mainly used to
gain
information and knowledge. In today's
world
,
internet
has a
lot
of importance and significance in everyone's life. There are numerous advantages of
internet
along with certain disadvantages as ' Every rose comes with thorns '. I will discuss both the merits and demerits of
internet
in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with the advantages, the
first
and foremost point which strikes my mind is that we can
gain
a
lot
of information in just a single click with the help of
internet
. We can
gain
a
lot
of knowledge related to any subject.
Moreover
, it h
elp
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helps
the students and workers to organise and analyse their work more efficiently. It saves a
lot
of time of students and workers. It makes the
world
small and connected.
Also
, it gives us news of all over the
world
related to any issue. Moving
further
, there are
also
many on-line e
ducational
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education
websites available on the
internet
which help children to ameliorate in their studies. People can
also
gain
knowledge about d
ifferent jobs
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the different jobs
available, according to one's q
ualification.
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qualifications
It plays a great role in our life to connect ourselves with our friends and relatives living far away from us. We can remain attached w
ith
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to
them through various social networking sites. We can chat and do video conferencing.
Also
, we can do o
n-line
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
shopping o
f
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for
various items like clothes, books, gadgets and so on. Under the mountain of advantages, there are
also
some certain disadvantages of
i
nternet.
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the internet
It distracts the children from their studies. Children waste a
lot
of time in chatting on different social networking sites and by playing o
n-line
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
games too. There are
also
some vulgar websites that are not relevant for children.
Also
, by working several hours on
i
nternet
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the internet
by using computers and mobiles, adversely affect our health. The facilities provided to us on the
internet
are making us lazy. In conclusion, it can be said that we cannot imagine
this
modern
world
without
internet
. It has made our life easier. Almost everyone in
this
world
is dependent like a parasite on the
internet
for one or other t
hing but
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thing, but
we should use it in a limit as it is rightly said that 'Excess of everything is bad'
.
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.
Also
, it is upto us whether we use it in a right way or in a wrong w

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