Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both vioews and give your opinion.

In some countries, governments sponsor artists in many ways. While some would say that money should be spent elsewhere, I believe that

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is

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of the essential elements

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of

society development. On the

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hand, some people think that the

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should only spend money on something

that is

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essential for people’s living. It is

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because

areas

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as health care and infrastructure are affecting people’s daily life more directly.

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example, in

Thailand, there are only 20% of

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galleries that are funded by the

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because most of the resources are spent on

health care system

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the health care system

and housing.

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people’s basic needs should be taken care of, I believe that it is

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the

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’s responsibility to ensure their help is not limited only to basic needs but

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an

all-rounded development including

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and culture.

On the other hand

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, some people agree that supporting artists

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are

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of the

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’s

duty

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duties

. With the help

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of

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-owned institutions, artists no longer have to work for commercial purposes in order to earn a living, but to make

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freely, which is important for a country to have a positive

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and cultural growth.

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example in

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example, in

Japan,

ceramics

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ceramic

artists are sponsored by

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programs to work in artist villages to create artwork since 1990s, yet, they have been making remarkable achievements in the global world of ceramics.

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Therefore I

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Therefore, I

believe that with the

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’s help, it will make a great difference

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in

a country’s cultural good. In conclusion,

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some argued that

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is not as important as other basic needs, I believe that having the

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to help

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in

with

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development is as important because developing a quality living in the nation is

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an

all-rounded thing and

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is

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of the key cultural elements that should not be neglected.