Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays widespread opinion is social
web
pages have demolishing influence
on
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of
one
people
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person
as on
community
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the community
. My opinion as
man
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a man
who grown up before
popularity
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the popularity
of the internet social media, strongly agree with topic view. Overall,
this
essay shows advantages and disadvantages social
web
for explaining my opinion.
First
, of course people cannot ignore positive facts that people with mental or physical challenges do not other ways to communicate
instead
of social sites.
Moreover
, a social
web
provides
wide opportunity
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a wide opportunity
to stay in touch with
relatives even
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relatives, even
when they are
travelled
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travelling
, or like-minded people around the world
by
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of
Facebook or Twitter.
In addition
, social sites help quickly check recruitment companies or find out a new workplace by LinkedIn.
Consequently
, social
web
, at
first
glance, is needed.
Although
more bothering for people, especially many parents, facts that social sites like drugs after
that children
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that, children
or even adult have fewer interests to work and studying. Inasmuch as social
web
suggested sedentary
life so
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life, so
people who use it frequently throughout
time
have been accumulating problems with health or even sick of
hypodynamia
.
Moreover
, some people notice a degradation in communicative capabilities because people more and more
time
use not
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use, not
linking
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linked
words or
words
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word
parasite
instead
grammar speech that complicated understanding them.
Consequently
, I think we should diminish of using
web sites
a computer connected to the internet that maintains a series of web pages on the World Wide Web
websites
to youth. In short, I am totally
agreed
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agree
with people who bother about influence social sites phenomena on life everybody in the future, because a lot of
time
I observe
situation
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situation, then
then
children
instead
of studying or walk on street spent all
time
in
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on
web
pages that could lead to ambiguous aftermath.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social isolation
  • virtual interactions
  • mental health
  • feelings of inadequacy
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • misinformation
  • destabilize
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • productivity
  • foster connections
  • educational content
  • social activism
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