There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to the company arrive. The manager has asked for suggestions on how the reception area could be improved Please write a letter to our manager. In the letter • Describe the complaints • Say why the reception area is important • Suggest how the reception area could be improved

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is regarding the dissatisfaction which has been reported by the visitors about the company’s

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. The complaints are mostly about lack of sitting

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there were about the size of the room as there are a large number of clients and some of them have to stand outside due to lack of space and

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of staff available at the

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desk are not sufficient to guide multiple clients efficiently. As it is said that

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impression is the

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impression! The

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plays a crucial role

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the reputation of the company whenever a customer enters the company’s premises If I may, there are a few suggestions to improve the

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as, there is a spare room

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which can be used for its expansion as well as some coaches should be added along with a few company magazines or newspapers as a leisure activity and

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increasing the number of staff handling the entrance. Awaiting your reply, Thanking you, Yours sincerely,

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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172 words

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The Greeting

Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People, who go to live in other countries should follow the customs and tradition of the new country, to what extent to do you agree or disagree?

People believe that some individuals are born with leadership skills, while others think that leadership skills can be made. Discuss both views.

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