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A foreign friend of your plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you do not have time on that date. Give your friend another alternate date to come. In your letter, you should: apologize for it explain what you will busy for on that date suggest to him/her alternate time to come

#friend #plans #visit #place #time #date
Dear Taylor, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. Thank you for your message, and it is always great to hear from you. I was so thrilled to know that we'll be spending the
next
 week together, but unfortunately, there is a change of plan. I know we planned
this
 months ago, and I am incredibly sorry. I feel incredibly dreadful about it. If you recall, in my
last
 letter, I mentioned about my business trip to Dubai, which was due on the 24th of March 2020. Sadly, the dates
are preponed
Suggestion
are preparing
are prepared
prepare
 for the upcoming week.
In addition
 to
this
, the company has already booked the tickets, and it is mandatory for all the employees to attend the conference. Since you have not yet booked your tickets, we can still decide on a different date. I shall be back from the trip on the 30th of March, and my leave would be until the 20th of April, so please let me know whichever date is feasible for you, and
then
 we can plan
accordingly
. I know
this
 must be inconvenient because of
such
 short notice, but I hope you understand, and I sincerely apologize for the trouble
this
 may have caused. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Take care. Regards, Shawn
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