Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, it is generally accepted that one who lives
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may be the source of social and practical problems. I agree that living abroad, where speaking
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is of necessity, has
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impact on people as a whole. People living in foreign
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may suffer from several social challenges in that society. First of all, there could be the feeling of cultural shock that one could misunderstand or even misinterpret
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that nation's culture which leads to the isolation from them.
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social discrimination is liable to arise for linguistic and traditional reasons that a person inevitably encounters severe problems when
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unintendedly.
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, immigrants permanently living in Asian countries often fail to comprehend
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their cultural values
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written in
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, there are
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and other rules in that
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more difficult for immigrants to obey. Despite living in
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often has a positive influence, in terms of local laws there always exist complications and frequent unfair charges. Another reason for practical problems could be studying or working where a person
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from
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barrier, and living abroad,
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of actions on a daily basis, communication of local society
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that immigrants would feel
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unless they are able to communicate
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. In conclusion, there is no doubt
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that people,
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inability to speak
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and to follow
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, tend to struggle to integrate socially.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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