You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter : Describe the work you have been doing Explain why you can no longer do this work Recommend another person who is interested in this work

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I am writing to inform you that I am unable to continue volunteering at your organization, Seattle Local Soup Kitchen, from

Monday. My responsibilities included serving soup and clearing the tables every Wednesday from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m. Since my final exams and project submission deadlines are approaching, I will not be able to participate in the volunteer work. Even though I immensely enjoy the job, I need to spend more time studying for the examination. After I complete my semester, I would love to return. Meanwhile, I can recommend my friend as my replacement. My friend Lily

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enjoys volunteering, and she has worked in a soup kitchen before. I assure you she will be able to

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all the responsibilities without any problems or hesitation. She is available to cover all my shifts and is flexible if the schedule changes. I am attaching her details with

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letter. I look forward to hearing from you, and I hope you will take my recommendation under consideration Yours faithfully Bo Bi

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Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

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Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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