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Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

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It Is Often Argued That A Huge Amount Of Public Money Is Spent On Government Holidays And Grand Celebrations Rather Than Spending On Important Issues. I Strongly Standby
This
 Opinion And Think That
Such
 Amount Could Be Spent On Other Things.
First
 Of All, I Believe That A Lot Of Money Is Being Wasted In Celebrating Public Holidays And Festivals At Large Level. It Is Better To Allocate That Amount On
Development
Suggestion
The Development
 Of The Country
Instead
 Of Wasting On Unnecessary Celebrations. When The Government Invites people In These Events, There Is Huge Chaos Which Does Not Allow People To Fully Enjoy The Festivity.
Furthermore
,
This
 Leads To Disappointment Among People And ultimately, the Government Is Held Accountable.
For instance
,
focus
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the focus
 should be on development of schools, colleges and
hospitals which
Accept comma addition
hospitals, which
 will help
in
Suggestion
with
advancement
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the advancement
 of the nation.
Secondly
, A Lot Of Food Gets Wasted In These Parties And Events. A lot of preparation and effort
is involved
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are involved
into
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in
 making a celebration grand and successful. Poverty has become an integral part of the state. The food stuffs that are discarded can be used to feed malnutrition and poverty stricken community.
For example
, many authorities have developed the concept of storing the uneaten meals in the
refrigerator which
Accept comma addition
refrigerator, which
 distributed among
poor people
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the poor people
 later on. To conclude, I am strong supporter of the belief that
instead
 of wasting a lot of meals and amount of fund in festivals and national holidays, local and central authorities and organizers should focus on vita issues like poverty and education which will be beneficial for the country and its citizen in the future
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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